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The line graph depicts the number of books of four genres lent by a library in the year 2015. From the following graph, we can clearly point out that non-fiction and biography were the most popular among students, around 50-55 books were lent during the months of October and December. An amazing thing to note in the trend is that the demand of every genre was increased in the month of October except for fiction and non-fiction, this can account for the end semester exams of students. Moreover we can see an increase in the demand of non fiction from 40 to 55 and decrease in the sci fi genre by 3. 3 % during December 2015 which could mean end of exams. From the statistics present in the graph we can predict that the students were from arts and literature department because of high demands of fiction and biography genres throughout the year.

The line graph depicts the number of books of four genres lent by a library in the year 2015.

From the following graph, we can clearly
 point out that non-fiction and biography were the most popular among students, around 50-55 books were lent
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genre
was increased
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except for
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end
 semester exams of students.

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sci fi
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genre
 by 3. 3 % during December 2015 which could mean This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of exams. From the statistics present in the graph we can predict that the students were from arts and literature department This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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 of high demands of fiction and biography genres throughout the year. 