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the chart below the daily oil production in 4 countries in 4 year.

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The provided chart depicts the daily production of oil in Nigeria, Chad, Congo and Somalia during the period of 5 years since 2000, using barrels as a unit. According to the data, it could be seen that oil production in all the country was climbe, except Congo and Chad was the country using oil latest. Nigeria and Congo were the two countries with the highest oil construction with 205, 000 units and 275, 000 units respectively in 2000. The following year, all of them decreased slightly and in 2002, Nigeria and Congo reached 190, 000 and 222, 000 units. In 2003, two countries had opposite developments, Nigeria showed signs of growth and reached 213, 000 units in the last year of the survey, ranking first in oil production. However, Congo continued to decrease in the following years and only reached 203, 000 units in 2004. Chad and Somalia are two countries with negligible oil production but with a rapid increase in data. Somalia reached 5000 units in 2000, and increased tenfold over the next four years. As for Chad, not until 2003 did this country record 8000 barrels oil produced on a daily and this amount surged to finish at an equal level of production to Somalia's in the last year.
The provided chart depicts the daily
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in Nigeria, Chad, Congo and Somalia during the period of 5 years since 2000, using barrels as a unit.

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in all the
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was
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, except Congo and Chad was the
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using
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latest.

Nigeria and Congo were the two
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with the highest
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construction with 205, 000
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and 275, 000
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units
respectively
in 2000. The following
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, all of them decreased
slightly
and in 2002, Nigeria and Congo
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190, 000 and 222, 000
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. In 2003, two
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had opposite developments, Nigeria
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signs of growth and
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213, 000
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in the last
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of the survey, ranking
first
in
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.
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, Congo continued to decrease in the following years and
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203, 000
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in 2004.

Chad and Somalia are two
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with negligible
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with a rapid increase in data. Somalia
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5000
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in 2000, and increased tenfold over the
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four years. As for Chad, not until 2003 did this
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record 8000 barrels
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produced on a daily and this amount surged to finish at an equal level of
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to Somalia's in the last
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