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Given is the pie chart providing us with information regarding the domestic consumption of energy in Australia in the median and how much fumes like CO2 they produce. Overall, it is starkly apparent that the most usage of energy is for heating systems, while water heating owes the biggest proportion of greenhouse gas emissions. When scrutinized more rigorously, it can be inferred that the major part of the energy is utilizing for keeping households warm by two-fifth of the whole proportion. Its gas emission, however, is less than half of that amount. Water heating, also, has allocated 30% of energy use to its part and produced the largest number of fumes which is a third of the whole. Other appliances such as stoves, using less than a fifth of total energy, while their gas emission is twice that number, around 28%. Then, there are refrigerators and lighting systems that use 7 and 4 percent consequently, whereas their emission is doubled. Cooling systems utilizing the lowest energy and producing the bottom rate of greenhouse gas about 2% and 3% respectively.

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, it can be inferred
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 is utilizing for keeping households warm by two-fifth of the whole proportion. Its You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
 emission, however
, is less than half of that amount. Water heating, also
, has allocated 30% of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
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 to its part and produced the largest number of fumes which is a third of the whole.

Other appliances such as stoves, using less than a fifth of total You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
, while their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
 emission is twice that number, around 28%. Then, there are refrigerators and lighting systems that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 7 and 4 percent consequently
, whereas their emission is doubled
. Cooling systems utilizing the lowest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 and producing the bottom rate of greenhouse You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
 about 2% and 3% respectively
. 