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The supplied diagram illustrates the way in which frozen fish pies are produced. Overall, the manufacturing process takes seventeen steps to complete in addition to two extra delivery steps. Salmon (fish) and potatoes are cooked separately and merged afterwards. Firstly, the potatoes are reserved for the time-period of up to one month. After that, they are cleaned by sprinkling liquid onto it. Then, these are peeled and sliced and send for boiling and the same time for chilling. Ultimately, the potato slices are stored. On the other hand, the fresh salmon fish are poured with fresh lime water and then salt is showered upon it. Next step involves heating inside an oven. After that, man-power is deployed for removal of bones and skin from fish. One quality check is also done by an inspector at this intermediate step. Apart from fish preparation, peas sauce is also made side by side. The fish, sauce and stored potatoes are then mixed and wrapped. The packed boxes are freezed and then either stored or dispatched in the end.

The supplied diagram illustrates the way in which frozen fish pies are produced
.

Overall
, the manufacturing process takes seventeen steps to complete in addition
 to two extra delivery steps. Salmon (fish) and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
are cooked
separately
 and merged afterwards.

Firstly
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
are reserved
 for the time-period of up to one month.

After that, they are cleaned
 by sprinkling liquid onto it. Then,

these are peeled
 and sliced and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 for boiling and the same time for chilling.

Ultimately
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potato
 slices are stored
.

On the other hand
, the fresh salmon fish are poured
 with fresh lime water and then salt

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Is
is
 showered upon it. Next
 step involves heating inside an oven. After that, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
-power is deployed
 for removal of bones and skin from fish. One quality This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 is also
 done by an inspector at this intermediate step.

Apart from fish preparation, peas sauce is also
 made side by side. The fish, sauce and stored You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
 are Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.then.then!then?then:then,then;
then


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Mixed
mixed
 and wrapped. The packed boxes are Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean “froze”, the past tense form of the verb ‘freeze’?frozefreezefreezesfreezerbreezedfree zed
freezed
 and then either stored or dispatched in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
. 