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The graph compares the information about the principal resources of energy from 1980 to 1990 in the USA. Units are measured in percentage. It can be concluded from the graph that the oil kept its dominance, however it experienced a downward trend over the provided period, while hydroelectric and nuclear power registered by far the lowest percentages. In detail, in 1980, the utilization of oil and coal in the United States of America was much more higher, standing at 42% and 22% respectively. Although the figure for coal increased to more than a quarter, oil saw a considerable reduction and reached at 33% in the year of 1990. In terms of natural gas, it declined from 26% to a quarter between 1980 and 1990, while nuclear and hydroelectric power saw an identical rate at about 5% in 1980. Following year, the demand for nuclear power had grown to 10% as opposed to hydroelectric energy, since it stayed the same level as in 1980.

The two pie charts demonstrate the primary sources of elecricity to supply USA citizens between 1980 and 1990. Units are measured in percentages. Overall, at first glance, it is evident that the greatest percentages of energy harnessed from oil and natural gas, whereas, hydroelectric power and nuclear power utilised in far lower levels to produce Americans with electricity within the decade. To begin with, the greatest proportion of energy was harnessed from oil which represented 42 % of total sources in 1980, compared to nearly 33% in the last year of the period. The second main source of energy was natural gas in both years. The figure for this category was about 25% in 1980 and slightly more than a quarter in 1980 respectively. Turning to the utilization of coal to supply Americans with electricity. This figure was responsible for approximetely 22% in 1980. Following this, this upward trend increased by 5% and finished at 27 % in the year of 1990. In the first year USA use 5% of nuclear power to produce electricity. However, this trend was nearly two times as low as those in 1990. Interestingly, only 5% of electricity was generated by hydroelectric power in both years.
The two pie charts demonstrate the primary sources of
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to supply USA citizens between 1980 and 1990. Units
are measured
in percentages.

Overall
, at
first
glance, it is evident that the greatest percentages of energy harnessed from oil and natural gas, whereas, hydroelectric
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power
and nuclear
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power
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utilised
in far lower levels to produce Americans with
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electricity
within the decade.

To
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begin
with, the greatest proportion of energy
was harnessed
from oil which represented 42 % of total sources in 1980, compared to
nearly
33% in the last
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year
of the period. The second main source of energy was natural gas in both years. The figure for this category was about 25% in 1980 and
slightly
more than a quarter in 1980
respectively
.

Turning to the utilization of coal to supply Americans with
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electricity
. This figure was responsible for
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approximetely
22% in 1980. Following this, this upward trend increased by 5% and finished at 27 % in the
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year
of 1990. In the
first
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USA
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use
5% of nuclear
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power
to produce
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electricity
.
However
, this trend was
nearly
two times as low as those in 1990.
Interestingly
,
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only
5% of
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electricity
was generated
by hydroelectric
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power
in both years.

IELTS academic The graph compares the information about the principal resources of energy from 1980 to 1990 in the USA. Units are measured in percentage. It can be concluded from the graph that the oil kept its dominance, however it experienced a downward trend over the provided period, while hydroelectric and nuclear power registered by far the lowest percentages. In detail, in 1980, the utilization of oil and coal in the United States of America was much more higher, standing at 42% and 22% respectively. Although the figure for coal increased to more than a quarter, oil saw a considerable reduction and reached at 33% in the year of 1990. In terms of natural gas, it declined from 26% to a quarter between 1980 and 1990, while nuclear and hydroelectric power saw an identical rate at about 5% in 1980. Following year, the demand for nuclear power had grown to 10% as opposed to hydroelectric energy, since it stayed the same level as in 1980.

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  • The graph compares the information about the principal resources of energy from 1980 to 1990 in the USA. Units are measured in percentage. It can be concluded from the graph that the oil kept its dominance, however it experienced a downward trend over the provided period, while hydroelectric and nuclear power registered by far the lowest percentages. In detail, in 1980, the utilization of oil and coal in the United States of America was much more higher, standing at 42% and 22% respectively. Although the figure for coal increased to more than a quarter, oil saw a considerable reduction and reached at 33% in the year of 1990. In terms of natural gas, it declined from 26% to a quarter between 1980 and 1990, while nuclear and hydroelectric power saw an identical rate at about 5% in 1980. Following year, the demand for nuclear power had grown to 10% as opposed to hydroelectric energy, since it stayed the same level as in 1980.