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The process chart depicts the stages recycling of glass bottles.

The process chart depicts the stages recycling of glass bottles. It is evident that this process includes seven steps. At a fleeting glance, first, the glass bottles are collected from public and it is divided into three parts like green, brown and transparent. Then, these bottles are transferred to processing plant with the help of trucks. After that, these bottles are separated into two fragments mental caps and plastic caps. Moving further, in fourth step glass bottles are broken down. Then, the broken glass is transferred to the glass factory with the help of car. In next step, glass and raw materials are melted into furnace and kept under 1200 degree c. In last stage with melted mixture new bottles are made. Overall, there are several steps in this flow chart. It is clear that all the stages are important the process. Without any single, the entire process will come to a grinding halt.

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bottles
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help
 of trucks. After that, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
bottles
are separated
 into two fragments mental caps and plastic caps.

Moving further
, in fourth step You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmirror
glass
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bottles
are broken
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glass
is transferred
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glass
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help
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glass
 and raw materials are melted
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kept
 under 1200 degree c. In last stage with melted mixture new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
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.

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clear
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important
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process
. Without any single, the entire You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
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come
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