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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The illustrations firstly compare the proportion of using energy in different domestic areas by Australians and secondly demonstrate greenhouse gases emitted as a consequence of that usage. The most significant fact to emerge from the diagrams is that the percentage of greenhouse gas which is emitted with regard to heating equipment, contrary to other sections, is significantly less than that of energy consumption in this sector. Although Australian citizens consume nearly a half of energy (42%) to heat their homes, the emissions of greenhouse gases in this domain is just 15%. Water heating as the second place of energy use (with three out of ten percent) ranks first with 32% in gas emissions among the rest of zones. Rather negligible share of energy demands and gas emission, 2 and 3 percent, is held for cooling purposes. Refrigeration systems with a small stake of energy utilization at 7% emit gases twice this portion (14%). similar to this, about 4% of energy is used to light homes in Australia, which is half the fraction of greenhouse gases produced in association with this part. Likewise, the ratio of the percentage of gas production to that of energy use is approximately double for other appliances consumed homely by those living in Australia (28% to 15%).
The illustrations
firstly
compare the proportion of using
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in
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different
domestic areas by Australians and
secondly
demonstrate
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greenhouse
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gases
emitted as a consequence of that usage.

The most significant fact to emerge from the diagrams is that the percentage of
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greenhouse
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gas
which
is emitted
with regard to heating equipment, contrary to other sections, is
significantly
less than that of
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energy
consumption in this sector.

Although Australian citizens consume
nearly
a half of
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energy
(42%) to heat their homes, the emissions of
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greenhouse
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gases
in this domain is
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just
15%. Water heating as the second place of
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energy
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use
(with three out of ten percent) ranks
first
with 32% in
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gas
emissions among the rest of zones.
Rather
negligible share of
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energy
demands and
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gas
emission, 2 and 3 percent,
is held
for cooling purposes.

Refrigeration systems with a
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small
stake of
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energy
utilization at 7% emit
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gases
twice this portion (14%).
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similar
to this, about 4% of
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energy
is
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used
to light homes in Australia, which is half the fraction of
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greenhouse
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gases
produced in association with this part.
Likewise
, the ratio of the percentage of
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gas
production to that of
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energy
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use
is approximately double for other appliances consumed homely by those living in Australia (28% to 15%).
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IELTS academic The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from energy use.

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