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The flowchart below shows the recycling produce of glass bottle.

The process chart depicts the stages recycling of glass bottles. It is evident that this process includes seven steps. At a fleeting glance, first of all, the glass bottles are collected from public and it is divided into three parts like green, brown and transparent. Then, these bottles are transferred to processing plant with the help of trucks. After that, these bottles are separated into two fragments mental caps and plastic caps.

The process chart depicts the stages recycling of glass You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
bottles
. It is evident that this process includes seven steps.

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first of all
, the glass You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
bottles
are collected
 from Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).public, and
public and
 it is divided
 into three parts like green, brown and transparent. Then, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
bottles
are transferred
 to processing plant with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of trucks. After that, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvialglassurnjarjug
bottles
are separated
 into two fragments mental caps and plastic caps. 