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The flowchart below shows the recycling produce of glass bottle.

The process chart depicts the stages recycling of glass bottles. It is evident that this process includes seven steps. At a fleeting glance, first of all, the glass bottles are collected from public and it is divided into three parts like green, brown and transparent. Then, these bottles are transferred to processing plant with the help of trucks. After that, these bottles are separated into two fragments mental caps and plastic caps.
The process chart depicts the stages recycling of glass
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bottles
. It is evident that this process includes seven steps.

At a fleeting glance,
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first of all
, the glass
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bottles
are collected
from
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public and
it
is divided
into three parts like green, brown and transparent. Then, these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bottles
are transferred
to processing plant with the
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help
of trucks. After that, these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bottles
are separated
into two fragments mental caps and plastic caps.

IELTS academic The flowchart below shows the recycling produce of glass bottle.

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