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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The residential energy usage and greenhouse gas emission proportions in Australia are depicted in two pie charts. The energy consumption for heating water and the amount of greenhouse gases emitted to atmosphere by this category are evidently in the largest sections. By contrast, cooling sectors reach the least percentage in both charts. At first glance, it can be seen that heating energy usage has the biggest section in first pie chart by%. However, its greenhouse gas emission is not among the huge sectors. In addition, the amount of emitted greenhouse gas produced due to utilization of energy in water heating part with approximately one-third percentage contains the highest amount of its gas emission in comparison to others. The reverse is true for cooling, which not only is the minimum fraction in the emission of gases, but also it is the lowest proportion in the utilization of domestic energy in Australia with 3% and 2% respectively. On the other hand, lighting and refrigeration gain the second and third positions in both pie charts with 4% and 7% in the first chart and 8% and 14% in the second one respectively.
The residential
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consumption for heating water and the amount of
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gases emitted to atmosphere by this category are
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in the largest sections. By contrast, cooling sectors reach the least percentage in both charts.

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is not among the huge sectors.
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, the amount of emitted
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produced due to utilization of
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in water heating part with approximately one-third percentage contains the highest amount of its
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in comparison
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The reverse is true for cooling, which not
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it is the lowest proportion in the utilization of domestic
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in Australia with 3% and 2%
respectively
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, lighting and refrigeration gain the second and third positions in both pie
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with 4% and 7% in the
first
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and 8% and 14% in the second one
respectively
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IELTS academic The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from energy use.

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