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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. According to the chart the top country to production of electricity is China with 5, 398 billion kWh but it consumes 5, 322 bkWh. In second number United States produce 4, 099 billion kWh but it only consume 3, 866 BkWh and the largest country in the world Russia is in third for the production of electricity it produce 1, 057 BkWh and consume 1, 038 BkWh which is very less compare to the China and United States. The production of electricity of japan is 936. 2 BkWh and it consumes 856. 7 BkWh. Huge country India is Fourth in the Rank. India produce 871 BkWh but consume only 698. 8 BkWh. Canada came in fifth rank for production of electricity it produce 618. 9 and consume very less 499. 9 BkWh. In number Six France produce 561. 2 BkWh and consume only 462. 9. After that Brazil produce 530. 7 BkWh and consume only 455. 8 which is very less. Germany produce 526. 6 BkWh and consume 582. 5. In last Korea Republic produce 485. 1 BkWh and consume 449. 5 BkWh. In conclusion, China and Unites States of America produce large amount of electricity than others. All the countries are independent to produce the electricity and the consume less than they produce except germany. Germany is the only country which consumes more than they produce and may be they have to buy electricity from other countries.
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4, 099 billion kWh
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compare to the China and United States. The
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499. 9
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561. 2
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462. 9. After that Brazil
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. Germany
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582. 5. In last Korea Republic
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In conclusion
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