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three various households in Canada

three various households in Canada PLn6J

The graph compares the three various households in Canada within the period of 1984 until 2020. Overall, it can be seen that the population rate for one person and lone parents are slightly increasing throughout the period, while for one-family type, only no children are presenting an upward trend while the two others were both declining. In detail, one person and lone parent comprised the minority in which it started at only 6% and 4% respectively. Interestingly, both landed at the same rate in the last two cut-offs at 12% in 2014 and 2020. On the other hand, one family household is composed of couples with no children, dependent, and non-dependent. Among these three, couples with dependent children overpassed the total number of the two remaining households, consisting of 52% of the totality. In the next years, it declined gradually, but still, it has the most percentage even though it lowered by 16% at the end of the period. Similarly, non-dependent is also declining from 11% in 2004, as the peak, this eventually decreased merely by 2% in 2020. On contrary, no children slowly climbed up from 19% in 1984 to 25 % in the years 2014 and 2020.

The graph compares the three various households in Canada within the period of 1984 until 2020. Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the population rate for one person and lone parents are slightly
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only
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children
 are presenting an upward trend while the two others were both declining.

In detail, one person and lone parent comprised the minority in which it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
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only
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. Interestingly
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cut
-offs at 12% in 2014 and 2020.

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, one family household is composed
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children
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children
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consisting of 52% of the totality. In the next
 years, it declined gradually
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but
still
, it has the most percentage even though
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end
 of the period. Similarly
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slowly
 climbed up from 19% in 1984 to 25 % in the years 2014 and 2020. 