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Men, Women and Children who ate five times of Fruit and Vegetables

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This bar chart illustrates the ( percentage of ) Men, Women and Children(who) ate five times (portions) of fruit and vegetables per day in (the) UK from 2001 to 2008 in 8 years. Overall, the highest percentage of all people consuming fruit and vegetables was (were) women, while children consistently accounted for the lowest proportion (can been seen). The percentage of Women who ate fruits and vegetables has (had)increased rapidly from 21% in 2001 to 35% in 2006 and has (had) fallen down to 30% in 2008. Women and Children ate more fruits and vegetables than Men(’s). From 2001 to 2003, the percentage of Men and Children who ate fruits and vegetables remained stable at 16% and 12% respectively. From that point, Men reached gradually to a significant (percentage of) about 27% in both 2006 and 2007. From 2007 there was a gradual fall and reached 27 percent in 2008 )In 2007, the percentage of Children who ate portions of fruits and vegetables increased to 27% and decreased to 26% in the (final year)2008.
This bar chart illustrates the
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five times (portions) of
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per day in (the) UK from 2001 to 2008 in 8 years.

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has (had)increased
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from 21% in 2001 to 35% in 2006 and has (had) fallen down to 30% in 2008.
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remained stable at 16% and 12%
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2007 there was a gradual fall and reached 27 percent in 2008
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increased to 27% and decreased to 26% in the (final year)2008.
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IELTS academic Men, Women and Children who ate five times of Fruit and Vegetables

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174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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