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The map show the town of stockford in 1986 and in present

The map show the town of stockford in 1986 and in present Nwn1b
The diagram given compare changes which was occurred in one area called Stockford in years 1986 and present. We can see from maps that there were many innovation rather than in 1986, especially in south of bridge. The only things that remained without change were place of post office, bridge and primary school. Farmland in 1986 was demolished and was replaced with a number of houses in the east of river Stovkford, as well as, two shops were converted into many houses along the main road. The large house which was located approximately in center of village with a relatively large garden was extended and was replaced with a larger building called retirement home, however, instead of garden was constructed many houses and a road that connected retirement home to main road. Primary school where there were farmland in north of it, was expended and a number houses and a road was erected, while farmland was pulled down
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Stockford
in years 1986 and present.

We can
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from maps that there were
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many innovation
rather
than in 1986,
especially
in south of bridge. The
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things that remained without
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place of post office, bridge and primary school.

Farmland in 1986
was demolished
and
was replaced
with a number of
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houses
in the east of river
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Stovkford
,
as well
as, two shops
were converted
into
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houses
along the main road.

The large
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house
which
was located
approximately in center of village with a
relatively
large garden
was extended
and
was replaced
with a larger building called retirement home,
however
,
instead
of garden
was constructed
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houses
and a road that connected retirement home to main road. Primary school where there were farmland in north of it,
was expended
and a number
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houses
and a road
was erected
, while farmland
was pulled
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