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The map show the town of stockford in 1986 and in present

The map show the town of stockford in 1986 and in present Nwn1b

The diagram given compare changes which was occurred in one area called Stockford in years 1986 and present. We can see from maps that there were many innovation rather than in 1986, especially in south of bridge. The only things that remained without change were place of post office, bridge and primary school. Farmland in 1986 was demolished and was replaced with a number of houses in the east of river Stovkford, as well as, two shops were converted into many houses along the main road. The large house which was located approximately in center of village with a relatively large garden was extended and was replaced with a larger building called retirement home, however, instead of garden was constructed many houses and a road that connected retirement home to main road. Primary school where there were farmland in north of it, was expended and a number houses and a road was erected, while farmland was pulled down

The diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 compare This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 which was occurred
 in one area called Possible spelling mistake found.Stock ford
Stockford
 in years 1986 and present.

We can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 from maps that there were Possible agreement error. The noun innovation seems to be countable; consider using: "many innovations".many innovations
many innovation
rather
 than in 1986, especially
 in south of bridge. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 things that remained without This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
Did you mean "where" or "we"?wherewe
were
 place of post office, bridge and primary school.

Farmland in 1986 was demolished
 and was replaced
 with a number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
 in the east of river Possible spelling mistake found.StanfordStaffordStamfordRockfordStockyardStockport
Stovkford
, as well
 as, two shops were converted
 into This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
 along the main road.

The large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 which was located
 approximately in center of village with a relatively
 large garden was extended
 and was replaced
 with a larger building called retirement home, however
, instead
 of garden was constructed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
 and a road that connected retirement home to main road. Primary school where there were farmland in north of it, was expended
 and a number You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
 and a road was erected
, while farmland was pulled
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphdown.down!down?down:down,down;
down