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A flow chart showing the negative effects of trampling in the countryside.

A flow chart showing the negative effects of trampling in the countryside. 6mkj3
Given below is a flow chart explaining the damaging effect of humans trampling on the environment of the rural sites. At the first stage, flattened grass which occurs by visitors stepping in nature, leads to two main problems: Damaged vegetation and compacted soil. As a result of the former, the growth process of plants gets weaker and reproducing procedure is harder to continue. Considering the effects of the other major problem which is compacted soil, it is hard for water and air to move through the plant’s soil causing not only a decrease in growth of plants, but also water running off the lands as a result of erosion. Finally, due to all former harmful stages a fall in vegetation proportion of area is predicted to happen. Considering water flowing on the lands as the other main damage, these two directly make the soil less quality and cause erosion in the countryside.
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Given
below is a flow chart explaining the damaging effect of humans trampling on the environment of the rural sites.

At the
first
stage, flattened grass which occurs by visitors stepping in nature, leads to two main problems: Damaged vegetation and compacted soil.

As a result
of the former, the growth process of plants
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gets
weaker and reproducing procedure is harder to continue.

Considering the effects of the other major problem which
is compacted
soil, it is
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hard
for water and air to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
through the plant’s soil causing not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
a decrease in growth of plants,
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but
also
water running off the lands
as a result
of erosion.

Finally
, due to all former harmful stages a fall in vegetation proportion of area
is predicted
to happen. Considering water flowing on the lands as the other main damage, these two
directly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the soil less quality and cause erosion in the countryside.
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IELTS academic A flow chart showing the negative effects of trampling in the countryside.

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