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The diagram below shows information about the life cycle of a mosquito.

The diagram below shows information about the life cycle of a mosquito. DY3ko
The given pictorial representation illustrates the mosquito's life cycle. Overall, life cycle of mosquito has four different stages (Egg, Larva, Pupa, and Adult mosquito). In general, single egg overcome from egg raft and turned in adult mosquito by crossing larva and pupa stages. Initially, mosquito lay eggs on water then single egg formed group of eggs which is called egg raft. Eggs are remained inside the egg raft and single egg
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pictorial representation illustrates the mosquito's life cycle.
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, life cycle of
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mosquito
has four
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different
stages (Egg, Larva, Pupa, and Adult
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mosquito)
.
In general
, single egg overcome from egg raft and turned in adult
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mosquito
by crossing larva and pupa stages.

Initially
,
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mosquito
lay eggs on water then single egg formed group of eggs which
is called
egg raft. Eggs
are remained
inside the egg raft and single
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egg
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows information about the life cycle of a mosquito.

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
70 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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