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The two maps of the center of Islip town center now, and plan for its future development

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This illustration is compared information between two maps. The two maps of the center of Islip town center now, and plan for its future development. Overall a lot of features will be included in this modification. Looking more closely, According to the current map centre close to the countryside, alongside The main Road has few shops on both sides. But after development, shops will be aligned in a single row; for instance, A shopping center will be included opposite area. In this future development, the main road will be the oval shape and dual carriage for the safety and betterment of transportation, and it will cover the whole area. Alongside the main road on the south side, the school and housing keep the same. Turn to remain data set, and the park will be diminishing a little, besides the housing will be replaced north and south side inside of oval shape area. There will also be arranged Bus station cark park such like many features. To sum up, between the actual map of Islip town centre and the future development, many modifications are predicted. On the other hand, the city will be bigger with more facilities. But disappear the countryside.
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maps
of the center of
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Islip
town center
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, and plan for its future
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Overall
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a lot of
features will
be included
in this modification.

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closely
, According to the
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current
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map
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centre
close to the countryside, alongside The main Road has few shops on both sides.
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But
after
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development
, shops will
be aligned
in a single row;
for instance
, A shopping center will
be included
opposite area. In this future
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, the main road will be the oval shape and dual carriage for the safety and betterment of transportation, and it will cover the whole area. Alongside the main road on the south side, the school and housing
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keep
the same.

Turn to remain data set, and the park will be diminishing a
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little
,
besides
the housing will
be replaced
north and south side inside of oval shape area. There will
also
be arranged
Bus station
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cark
park such like
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many
features.

To sum up, between the actual
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map
of
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Islip
town
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centre
and the future
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,
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many
modifications
are predicted
.
On the other hand
, the city will be bigger with more facilities.
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But
disappear the countryside.
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IELTS academic The two maps of the center of Islip town center now, and plan for its future development

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