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The given line graph compares average carbon dioxide emission per person among the four countries in 1997 to 2007.

The given line graph compares average carbon dioxide emission per person among the four countries in 1997 to 2007. w7Xqm
The given line graph compares average carbon dioxide emission per person among the four countries in 1997 to 2007. overall, Carbon dioxide emission of Portugal increased signifincantly along with Italy carbon emission rose noticeably. whereas Sweden and UK carbon emission dropped gradually till at the end of the given period. It can be seen that United kindom Carbon emission started from approximately 11 metric tonnes, In 2007 it dropped around 7 metric tonnes. Moreover, In sweden, carbon dioxide emission began from almost 7 metric tonnes and a noticeable increase had seen in 1977 nearly 10 metric tonnes. Subsequently, it declined around 5 metric tonnes in 2007. On the other hand, In portugal, carbon emission lunched by approximately 1 metric tonnes that increased signifincantly, In 2007 it went to nearly 6 metric tonnes. Furthermore, In Italy also rose 4 metric tonnes to nearly 8 mitric tonnes. Both Portugal and Italy carbon dioxide emission rose respectively over the given years.
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per person among the four countries in 1997 to 2007.

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of Portugal increased
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rose
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from approximately 11 metric tonnes, In 2007 it dropped around 7 metric tonnes.
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began from almost 7 metric tonnes and a noticeable increase had
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lunched by approximately 1 metric tonnes that increased
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