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Three pie charts depict the annual spending expenditures by a selected school in The UK in the years 1981, 1991, and 2001.

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Three pie charts depict the annual spending expenditures by a selected school in The UK in the years 1981, 1991, and 2001. Overall, by having a more meticulous review it is evident that the teachers’ salary accounted for most portion of the spending whereas the insurance was responsible for least spend money. In 1981 teachers’ salaries made up 40% of the total expenses followed by the other workers’ salaries at 28% while recourses along with the furniture and equipment accounted for 15% each. Insurance on the other hand however was only 2% of the cost. In 1991 the teachers’ salaries were still the largest expense comprising half of it at 50%. At the second and third place were other workers’ salaries and recourses with a negligible difference at 22% and 20% respectively while the furniture and equipment along with the insurance accounted for less than 10%, at 5% and 3% respectively. In 2001 teachers’ salaries still had the most share of the money spent on it at 45% while the furniture and equipment followed suit at 23% and other workers’ salaries held the third spot at 15%. Although, the resources and the insurance had roughly analogous shares both being below 10%.
Three pie charts depict the annual spending expenditures by a selected school in The UK in the years 1981, 1991, and 2001.
Overall
, by having a more meticulous review it is evident that the
teachers’
salary
accounted for most portion of the spending whereas the
insurance
was responsible for least spend money.

In 1981
teachers’
salaries
made up 40% of the total expenses followed by the
other
workers’
salaries
at 28% while recourses along with the furniture and equipment accounted for 15% each.
Insurance
on the
other
hand
however
was
only
2% of the cost.

In 1991 the
teachers’
salaries
were
still
the largest expense comprising half of it at 50%. At the second and third place were
other
workers’
salaries
and recourses with a negligible difference at 22% and 20%
respectively
while the furniture and equipment along with the
insurance
accounted for less than 10%, at 5% and 3%
respectively
.

In 2001
teachers’
salaries
still
had the most share of the money spent on it at 45% while the furniture and equipment followed suit at 23% and
other
workers’
salaries
held the third spot at 15%. Although, the resources and the
insurance
had roughly analogous shares both being below 10%.
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IELTS academic Three pie charts depict the annual spending expenditures by a selected school in The UK in the years 1981, 1991, and 2001.

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