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The diagram below show The stage in equipment used To produce concrete for building pupose

The diagram below show The stage in equipment used To produce concrete for building pupose 0lB89
The picture gives information about the steps utilized in the manufacture of produce concrete for construction. It is clear that there are two distinct stages in this whole process, beginning with making cement passing through five steps, While the production of concrete accounts for 4 ingredients to create concrete. The process starts with limestone and clay crushed in the machine to combine them into a kind of powder. Subsequently, these powders are placed into a mixer machine and follow by the conduit and pass in a rotating with high temperature to ensure that it mixed well together. Once, these transform from the grinder into cement. This cement is one of the 4 ingredients to configure into concrete combined with sand, water and gravel. The recipe for making concrete includes 15% cement, one-tenth percent of water, a quarter percent of sand and a half percent of gravel, respectively mixed together. All four raw materials are put into the concrete machine to transform into concrete which products created to grindhouses buildings
The picture gives information about the steps utilized in the manufacture of produce concrete for construction.

It is
clear
that there are two distinct stages in this whole process, beginning with making cement passing through five steps, While the production of concrete accounts for 4 ingredients to create concrete.

The process
starts
with limestone and clay crushed in the machine to combine them into a kind of powder.
Subsequently
, these powders
are placed
into a mixer machine and follow by the conduit and pass in a rotating with high temperature to ensure that it mixed well together.
Once
, these transform from the grinder into cement.

This cement is one of the 4 ingredients to configure into concrete combined with sand, water and gravel. The recipe for making concrete includes 15% cement, one-tenth percent of water, a quarter percent of sand and a half percent of gravel,
respectively
mixed together. All four raw materials
are put
into the concrete machine to transform into concrete which products created to
grindhouses
buildings
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