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IELTS Writing Task 1 Chorleywood Map Description

IELTS Writing Task 1 Chorleywood Map Description m95NL
The map shows the growth of a village called Chorleywood between 1868 and 1994. It is clear that the village grew as the transport infrastructure was improved. Four periods of development are shown on the map, and each of the populated areas is near to the main roads, the railway or the motorway. From 1868 to 1883, Chorleywood covered a small area next to one of the main roads. Chorleywood Park and Golf Course is now located next to this original village area. The village grew along the main road to the south between 1883 and 1922, and in 1909 a railway line was built crossing this area from west to east. Chorleywood station is in this part of the village. The expansion of Chorleywood continued to the east and west alongside the railway line until 1970. At that time, a motorway was built to the east of the village, and from 1970 to 1994, further development of the village took place around motorway intersections with the railway and one of the main roads.
The map
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shows
the growth of a
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village
called
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Chorleywood
between 1868 and 1994.

It is
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clear
that the
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village
grew as the transport infrastructure was
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improved
. Four periods of development
are shown
on the map, and each of the populated
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areas
is near to the
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main
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roads
, the
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railway
or the motorway.

From 1868 to 1883,
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Chorleywood
covered a
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small
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area
next
to one of the
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main
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roads
.
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Chorleywood
Park and Golf Course is
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now
located
next
to this original
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village
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area
. The
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village
grew along the
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main
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road
to the south between 1883 and 1922, and in 1909 a
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railway
line
was built
crossing this
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area
from west to east.
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Chorleywood
station is in this part of the village.

The expansion of
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Chorleywood
continued to the east and west alongside the
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railway
line until 1970. At that time, a motorway
was built
to the east of the
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village
, and from 1970 to 1994,
further
development of the
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village
took place around motorway intersections with the
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railway
and one of the
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main
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roads
.
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IELTS academic IELTS Writing Task 1 Chorleywood Map Description

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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