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The map shows a beach hotel in 2003 and 2013.

The map shows a beach hotel in 2003 and 2013. nEe2K
The maps illustrate how a beach hotel was modernized between the years 2003 and 2013. Overall, it is clear that a beach hotel changed considerably with the accommodation and recreational amenities and six new features can be seen in the second diagram. According to the maps, in 2003, a beach hotel was quite, straightforward, undeveloped place while by 2013, it had experienced significant changes. First of all, the hotel rooms was expanded and removed to the west of the beach. Moreover, the remove of restaurant from the east to the west made way for the swimming pool. In detail, swimming pool was enlarge in front of the hotel rooms. To the south of the beach, the trees were planted surround the swimming pool and an addition fence was established, leading from the west to the east of the beach. This new fence further divided into two distinct areas, the upper part of which was the hotel zone and the beach was the other. Simultaneously, another striking change was expansion of seating area on the east side of the beach, next to the swimming pool. An interesting development had been the introduction of water sports which is to the east-south of the beach.
The maps illustrate how a
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beach
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hotel
was modernized
between the years 2003 and 2013.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that a
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beach
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hotel
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changed
considerably
with the accommodation and recreational amenities and six new features can be
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seen
in the second diagram.

According to the maps, in 2003, a
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beach
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hotel
was quite, straightforward, undeveloped place while by 2013, it had experienced significant
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changes
.
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First of all
, the
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hotel
rooms
was expanded
and removed to the west of the
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beach
.
Moreover
, the remove of restaurant from the east to the west made way for the swimming
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pool
. In detail, swimming
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pool
was
Consider using a past participle here: "enlarged".
enlarge
in front of the
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hotel
rooms.

To the south of the
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beach
, the trees
were planted
surround the swimming
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pool
and an addition fence
was established
, leading from the west to the east of the
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beach
. This new fence
further
divided into two distinct areas, the upper part of which was the
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hotel
zone and the
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beach
was the other.
Simultaneously
, another striking
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change
was expansion of seating area on the east side of the
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beach
,
next
to the swimming
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pool
. An interesting development had been the introduction of water sports which is to the east-south of the
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beach
.
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IELTS academic The map shows a beach hotel in 2003 and 2013.

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  American English
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202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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