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compare two table which are showing information about health in different countries

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A glance at shown chart and table reveals information about healthcare resources and life exectency among myriad nations. The provided chart appeals that Japan enjoys the much more hospital beds per thousand of population whit excact number of 14. United states, Meanwhile, offers the leas number of hospital beds for discussed number of people with approximate quantity of 3. Netherland provides nearly 4 hospital beds, on the other hand. A much more detailed look at table announces that Japan's athorities spend 2581$ per person and excpect 83 years of life for their residences. Which shows that they spend the least and expect the most. United states. in spite. decides to expand their people's life to 87 years which is the lowes amount among provided data and surprisengly spends 6719$ which proves that they are the most generous among others. Average life expectancey in Netherland, meanwhile, where the government tends to spend 3481$ is 80 years. All im one data indicates that regardless of how much money countries spend per person the more they provide hospital beds the more life expectency rise.
A glance at shown chart and table reveals information about healthcare resources and
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life
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exectency
among myriad nations.

The provided chart appeals that Japan enjoys the much more
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hospital
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beds
per thousand of population whit
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excact
number of 14.

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United states
, Meanwhile, offers the leas number of
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hospital
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beds
for discussed number of
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people
with approximate quantity of 3.

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Netherland
provides
nearly
4
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hospital
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beds
,
on the other hand
.

A much more detailed look at table announces that Japan's
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athorities
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spend
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2581$
per person and
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excpect
83 years of
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life
for their residences. Which
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shows
that they
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spend
the least and
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expect
the most.

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United states
.
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in
spite.
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decides
to expand their
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people
's
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life
to 87 years which is the
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lowes
amount among provided data and
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surprisengly
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spends
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$6719".
6719$
which proves that they are the most generous among others.

Average
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life
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expectancey
in
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Netherland
, meanwhile, where the
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government
tends to
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spend
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$3481".
3481$
is 80 years.

All
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im
one data indicates that regardless of how much money countries
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spend
per person the more they provide
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hospital
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beds
the more
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life
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expectency
rise.
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