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This table shows homeschooled students in Somecountry in years 1999-2004 in percenages.

This table shows homeschooled students in Somecountry in years 1999-2004 in percenages. yGk0g
The main trend is that all grades including kindergarten is growing for every year. Kindergarten started highest at 2. 4 and ended highest at 2. 9 percent with a constant increase. But grades 1-2 and grades 5-6 shows a little different trend, both starts at 1, 5 percent in 1999 and declines a little bit in 2000. Both of them increased slowly in 2002 and both it holds that course to 2004 where grades 1-2 ends at 2, 1 percent and grades 5-6 ends at 2. 6 percent. Grades 3-4 has a slow but steady growth througt all six years. It starts at 1. 6 percent in 1999 and increases 0. 1 every year except in 2003 when it peaks up 0. 2 percent. Grades 7-8 starts at 1. 6 percent and stays there for three years until they rapidly rose up to 2. 2 and peaked at 2. 5 in 2004. Overall, all grades including kindergarten has had a rise at rougly minimum 1 percent or more in 6 years.
The main trend is that all
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including kindergarten is growing for every
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highest at 2. 4 and ended highest at 2. 9
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1-2 and
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in 1999 and declines a
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5-6 ends at 2. 6 percent.

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all six years. It
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in 1999 and increases 0. 1 every
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except in 2003 when it peaks up 0. 2
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7-8
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