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The figures give information about taxation and consumer credit across a range of categories in UK

The figures give information about taxation and consumer credit across a range of categories in UK K0OLk
The line graph illustrates a percentage change in taxation and consumer credit from 1990 to 20210. As for the bar chart, it depicts information regarding consumer spending in the UK for three variables. Seen together, the figures suggest a link between the available credit, taxation and consumer spending over a 20-year period. The two figures show that there is a positive correlation between the availability of cheap credit and levels of consumer spending. For instance, once the available credit peaked at around 60 per cent in 2005, consumer spending in the United Kingdom reached its maximum as well. The two figures show that the rate of taxation correlates negatively with levels of consumer spending. For example, the taxation surged peaked at around 10 per cent in early 2000 and the amount of credit collected dipped leading to the lowest consumer spending in the UK. Overall, the figures show that consumer spending in the UK on different types of products may be influenced by the availability of consumer credit as well as taxation rate.
The line graph illustrates a percentage
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change
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taxation
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consumer
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credit
from 1990 to 20210. As for the bar chart, it depicts information regarding
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consumer
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spending
in the UK for three variables.
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Seen
together, the
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suggest a link between the available
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credit
,
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taxation
and
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consumer
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spending
over a 20-year period.

The two
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show
that there is a
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positive
correlation between the availability of
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cheap
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credit
and levels of
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consumer
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spending
.
For instance
, once the available
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credit
peaked at around 60 per cent in 2005,
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consumer
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spending
in the United Kingdom reached its maximum
as well
.

The two
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that the rate of
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taxation
correlates
negatively
with levels of
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consumer
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spending
.
For example
, the
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taxation
surged peaked at around 10 per cent in early 2000 and the amount of
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credit
collected dipped leading to the lowest
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consumer
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spending
in the UK.

Overall
, the
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figures
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show
that
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spending
in the UK on
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different
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as well
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rate.
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IELTS academic The figures give information about taxation and consumer credit across a range of categories in UK

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