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This pictures shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer or compost.

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This pictures shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer or compost. On first step, we need to get one empty plastic container size 2m3. Second step, put the organic waste inside the plastic container. In bottom place we put food waste as much 15cm then grass same with food just 15cm and on the top is newspaper. Next step is pour nitrogen and hot water at the same time to plastic container. The fourth steps is nitrogen and hot water are going to react and make heat with the organic waste. The last steps is we need to wait for 6 months. After 6 months this organic waste is going to change to be a compost and its finish. This compost has numerous function. You can spread and put this compost to your plants or to your garden. You don’t have to buy compost in shop anymore because you can made it on yourself with your own organic waste.
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one empty plastic container size 2m3. Second
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, put the
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inside the plastic container. In bottom place we put food
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then grass same with food
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and on the top is newspaper.
Next
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is pour nitrogen and hot water at the same time to plastic container. The fourth
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is nitrogen and hot water are going to react and
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. The last
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is we need to wait for 6 months. After 6 months this
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and its finish.

This
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has numerous function. You can spread and put this
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to your plants or to your garden. You don’t
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