Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain between 1950 and 2004/5. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain between 1950 and 2004/5. 0oV5

The line chart illustrates how many trips are made by passenger on three railway systems in Great Britain from 1950 to 2004/05. It is clear that between 1950 and 1960, the National rail network sprung up slightly from 1, 000 to approximately 1, 125 million passengers. However, from 1960 to the early 1980s, it declined rapidly by roughly 500 million passengers. Likewise, contemporaneously, the London Underground experienced a parallel, remained stable in the early period and then was a considerable deterioration of 500 million passengers. During 1980 and 2004/5, National rail network and London Underground suddenly peaked at roughly 1, 125 and 1, 000 million passengers respectively. By comparison, in the 1960s, the light rail and metro systems embarked on working unfavorably by carrying fewer passengers than the other two networks, no more than about 10 million during the first 15 years. However, when the other two networks went down, the number of journey made by passengers soared up, reaching around 200 million in 2004/05. Overall, the number of trips made by passenger on National rail network and London Underground fluctuated while the trend for Light rail and metro systems is upward.

The line chart illustrates how This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 trips are made
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerfaretouristcommuterpatrontraveler
passenger
 on three railway systems in Great Britain from 1950 to 2004/05.

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that between 1950 and 1960, the National You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfumescoldrantinveighcastigatethunder
rail
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwebchainsystemgridorganizationnet
network
 sprung up slightly
 from 1, 000 to approximately 1, 125 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerfaretouristcommuterpatrontraveler
passengers
. However
, from 1960 to the early 1980s, it declined rapidly
 by roughly 500 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerfaretouristcommuterpatrontraveler
passengers
. Likewise
, contemporaneously
, the London Underground experienced a parallel, remained stable in the early period and then was a considerable deterioration of 500 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerfaretouristcommuterpatrontraveler
passengers
. During 1980 and 2004/5, National You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfumescoldrantinveighcastigatethunder
rail
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwebchainsystemgridorganizationnet
network
 and London Underground suddenly
 peaked at roughly 1, 125 and 1, 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerfaretouristcommuterpatrontraveler
passengers
respectively
.

By comparison, in the 1960s, the light You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfumescoldrantinveighcastigatethunder
rail
 and metro systems embarked on working unfavorably
 by carrying fewer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerfaretouristcommuterpatrontraveler
passengers
 than the other two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwebchainsystemgridorganizationnet
networks
, no more than about 10 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 during the first
 15 years. However
, when the other two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwebchainsystemgridorganizationnet
networks
 went down, the number of journey made by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerfaretouristcommuterpatrontraveler
passengers
 soared up, reaching around 200 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 in 2004/05.

Overall
, the number of trips made by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerfaretouristcommuterpatrontraveler
passenger
 on National You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfumescoldrantinveighcastigatethunder
rail
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwebchainsystemgridorganizationnet
network
 and London Underground fluctuated while the trend for Light You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfumescoldrantinveighcastigatethunder
rail
 and metro systems is upward. 