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Barchart of number of peoples visted the Newyork city airport duringg years 1995 to 2000

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The given bar chart denotes the number if peoples had visyed the major Newyork city airports during years 1995 to 2000. The given data are of three airports called Jhon F. Kennedy, LaGuardia & Newark. In 1995, more people had visted the LaGuardia airport. Nearly 35 million people had visted this airport. And next they visit Jhon F. Kennedy nearly 25 million people. during this year people rarely want to goto Newark airport.
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peoples
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visyed
the major
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Newyork
city
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airports
during years 1995 to 2000. The
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data are of three
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airports
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Jhon
F. Kennedy, LaGuardia & Newark. In 1995, more
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people
had
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visted
the LaGuardia
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airport
.
Nearly
35 million
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people
had
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visted
this
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airport
. And
next
they visit
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Jhon
F. Kennedy
nearly
25 million
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people
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during
this year
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people
rarely want to
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goto
Newark
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airport
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IELTS academic Barchart of number of peoples visted the Newyork city airport duringg years 1995 to 2000

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
73 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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