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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category in 2016 compared with 2015

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category in 2016 compared with 2015 GE5Q
The graphical representation show about the export earnings between the year the 2015 and 2016. And the Table gives information about the values of earnings in terms of percentage in the year 2016 compared to 2015. Overall, the earnings in year 2016 had a great profit without considering the Gems and jewellery sector. The highest earnings were from the textiles department which counting upto 15% higher value than the year 2015. And, the agricultural department achieved the lowest profit of about 0. 81%. First graph indicates about the earning in $. The petroleum products value were incremented and gained extra 9$ billion dollar compared to earlier year. Engineering goods and Textiles areas where the two most highly profitable of these export. Despite this growth, gems and jewellery got a decrement of 5. 2% values. Textiles industry has over 45% of the profit in the year 2016, but surprisingly textiles price of the product is low over other products ranging from 31 to 32 million dollars.
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about the export
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between the
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the 2015 and 2016. And the Table gives information about the values of
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earnings
in terms of percentage in the
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year
2016 compared to 2015.

Overall
, the
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earnings
in
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2016 had a great profit without considering the Gems and
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jewellery
sector. The highest
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were from the
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textiles
department which counting
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upto
15% higher
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value
than the
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year
2015. And, the agricultural department achieved the lowest profit of about 0. 81%.

First
graph indicates about the
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earning
in $. The petroleum products
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value
were incremented
and gained extra
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9$
billion
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dollar
compared to earlier
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. Engineering
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goods
and
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Textiles
areas where the two most
highly
profitable of these export. Despite this growth, gems and
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jewellery
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a decrement of 5. 2% values.
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Textiles
industry has over 45% of the profit in the
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year
2016,
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surprisingly
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textiles
price of the product is low over other products ranging from 31 to 32 million dollars.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category in 2016 compared with 2015

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