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this map shows the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plans for its development. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

this map shows the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plans for its development. 5YwQ

one of the maps explains about the future plan of development of islip the small town and other one explains the present structure. overall, both of the maps clearly demonstrates the present and the future view of the town which includes some changes, mainly in the road and park. also installment of new places such as bus station and car park. The significant features of new development were building the dual carriage towards the countryside and southeast of town which covers school, housing and park. building the new roads helps to expand new housing near the park and also the northeast province of islip. By comparing the maps, school and the housing down to the south remains the same where as park gets smaller than as it is now. the now main road was converted in to pedestrians only. although the shops over north were removed, it replaced by huge shopping centre with car park and bus station in northwest region.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOne
one
 of the maps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interprets
explains
 about the future plan of development of Possible spelling mistake found.slipISIPi slipis lip
islip
 the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 town and other one This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interprets
explains
 the present structure.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOverall
overall
, both of the maps clearly
 demonstrates the present and the future view of the town which includes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
, mainly
 in the road and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?also,
also
 installment of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 places such as bus station and car park.

The significant features of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 development were building the dual carriage towards the countryside and southeast of town which covers school, housing and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBuilding
building
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 roads This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to expand You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 housing near the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 and also
 the northeast province of Possible spelling mistake found.slipISIPi slipis lip
islip
.

By comparing the maps, school and the housing down to the south remains the same Did you mean "whereas"?whereas
where as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 smaller than as it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 main road was converted
 in to pedestrians This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAlthough
although
 the shops over north were removed
, it replaced by huge shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 with car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 and bus station in northwest region. 