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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. eONK
The picture illustrates geothermal power plant from cold water to make the generator turbine spinning in the high voltage powerline line. Overall, there are various places where electricity can be produced. The circle of those can be seen in the underground, and the others are at ground level, leading to steam that pumps the water. Initially, cold water is pumped down to the underground with 4. 5 km depth, then it is injected well with hot rocks through geothermal zone. After that, it is processed in the production well, also the former cold water being heated, and that is pumped up to the ground level. Hot water is processed in the condensing machine to become steam. Afterward, in the high voltage powerline, if water vapor is spun with the powered steam, resulting high electrical energy, and it tends to produce electricity by powered turbine, and these cultivate especially circling in the generator turbine.
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Overall
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be produced
. The circle of those can be
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seen
in the underground, and the others are at ground level, leading to steam that pumps the water.

Initially
,
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cold
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water
is pumped
down to the underground with 4. 5 km depth, then it
is injected
well with hot rocks through geothermal zone. After that, it
is processed
in the production well,
also
the former
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cold
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water
being heated
, and that
is pumped
up to the ground level.

Hot
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water
is processed
in the condensing machine to become steam. Afterward, in the high voltage
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powerline
, if
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vapor
is spun
with the powered steam, resulting high electrical energy, and it tends to produce electricity by powered turbine, and these cultivate
especially
circling in the generator turbine.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

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