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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. xKJa
The various steps involved in producing electricity in the geothermal power plant are revealed in the picture. Overall, it is an artificial, linear process with several steps which begins with cold water pumped down and endings with transferring generator and turbine to the listric tower. The first stage to start in making geothermal power plant is that cold water are pumped down around 4. 5 kilometre into the ground, then passing through in the injection well. Following this, those water will be hot because go by geothermal zone then happening in the production well to pump up. After pumping up from the ground, steam will be produced by water condensed as the initial step in the outside. For the next stage, the listrical stream will be powered by steam then it is powered by turbine as the energy source and this produces electricity to the generator tower.
The various steps involved in producing electricity in the geothermal power plant
are revealed
in the picture.

Overall
, it is an artificial, linear process with several steps which
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begins
with
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cold
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water
pumped down and endings with transferring generator and turbine to the
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listric
tower.

The
first
stage to
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start
in making geothermal power plant is that
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cold
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water
are pumped
down around 4. 5
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kilometre
into the ground, then passing through in the injection well. Following this, those
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water
will be hot
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because
go by geothermal zone then happening in the production well to pump up.

After pumping up from the ground, steam will
be produced
by
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water
condensed as the initial step
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in the outside
. For the
next
stage, the
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listrical
stream will
be powered
by steam then it
is powered
by turbine as the energy source and this produces electricity to the generator tower.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

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