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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. EYbq
The diagram below depicts the electricity generation using geothermal energy. Overall, it is noticeable that the process is divided into 5 steps, which starts from using cold water to transmitting electricity to the National Grid. In detail, the first step begins with storing cold water in the reservoir that is located above the ground. Next, the cold water is being pumped 4. 5 km under the ground. After being pumped down, the second step involves injecting the cold water well into Hot Rocks called Geothermal Zone, where the cold water then turns into hot water. Following the second step is the third step where the Hot Water is well produced before being pumped up with the same height with when it was pumped down. Then the fourth step is marked with Hot Water which finally enters Condenser. The Condenser then produces Steam which will then moves through the turbine cabin. Next, the fifth step begins with the steam which rotates the Turbine. The turbine then powers the Generator to produce electricity, before finally being transferred to the National Grid.
The diagram below depicts the electricity generation using geothermal energy.
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, it is noticeable that the process
is divided
into 5
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steps
, which
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starts
from using
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cold
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water
to transmitting electricity to the National Grid.

In detail, the
first
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step
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begins
with storing
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cold
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water
in the reservoir that
is located
above the ground.
Next
, the
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cold
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water
is
being pumped
4. 5 km under the ground. After
being pumped
down, the second
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step
involves injecting the
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cold
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water
well into Hot Rocks called Geothermal Zone, where the
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cold
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water
then turns into hot
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water
. Following the second
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step
is the third
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step
where the Hot
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Water
is well produced
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before
being pumped
up with the same height with when it
was pumped
down.

Then the fourth
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step
is marked
with Hot
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Water
which
finally
enters Condenser. The Condenser then produces Steam which will then
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moves
through the turbine cabin.
Next
, the fifth
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step
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begins
with the steam which rotates the Turbine. The turbine then powers the Generator to produce electricity,
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before
finally
being transferred
to the National Grid.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

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6.5
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