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The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans. kOOW

The diagram explains the way in which aluminuim cans are converted for reusing. Overall, the process consists of seven stages, beginning with collected cans and ending up with reusing products. First of all, utilized tins are sorted in specially prepared containers. After that emissions are collected by lorries. The collected cans are transferred to a cabin to undergo processes like cleaning, sorting, shredding, and compressing. Following that, compressed materials will have treated and melted in a boiler. Subsequently, a roll of aluminium with a thickness of 2. 5-6 mm will come out, after which the resulting product is processed for making the cans. Finally, the cans are send out to shops, as example, in UK the 74% of tins are recycled.

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send
 out to shops, as example, in UK the 74% of tins are recycled
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