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This is an IELTS writing task 1 sample answer essay on the topic of an ownership of electrical appliances

This is an IELTS writing task 1 sample answer essay on the topic of an ownership of electrical appliances WEWqk

The line graphs depict the dynamics of the ownership and usage of electronic devices from 1920 to 2019 in a country. In general, the graph tend to increase in term of possessiveness and decrease in term of usage. It is noticeable that people's ownership in the three household appliances namely washing machine, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner experienced gradual increase within the observed time. It was only washing machine that decreased a lille bit in 1980 but then slowly escalated again. By contrast, the usage of those three household experienced consistent decrease from the overall time observation period. It was started with 50 hours per week usage from the cery first observation and plummed into only 10 hours in 2019. Those usage are for washing clothes, preparing meals, cleaning activities.

The line graphs depict the dynamics of the ownership and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanagement
usage
 of electronic devices from 1920 to 2019 in a country. In general
, the graph tend to increase in term of possessiveness and decrease in term of usage.

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people
's ownership in the three household appliances namely
 washing machine, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner experienced gradual increase within the observed time. It was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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but
 then slowly
 escalated again.

By contrast, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanagement
usage
 of those three household experienced consistent decrease from the overall
 time observation period. It was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 with 50 hours per week You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanagement
usage
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first
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 into This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 10 hours in 2019. Those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanagement
usage
 are for washing clothes, preparing meals, cleaning activities. 