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describe the process of making maple syrup

describe the process of making maple syrup XD17q

The given diagram illustrates the process of making maple syrup from the sap of its tree. As it can be seen clearly that there are several steps beginning with taking the sap and ending with finished syrups. At the first step, due to the freezing at nights, the sap move up to the stem of the trees; however, in the daylight with the warm climate, all of the sap flow down and people can take advantage of this feature to draw the sap through a hold in the tree. There is a tap being inserted into that hold in order to direct the sap into tubing that sends the sap to a container. The following stage is the evaporation process, the collected sap will be taken to an evaporator where it will be boiled until it becomes syrup. These syrups will be ready to be distributed to stores and consumers after being packaged in bottles or cans. As soon as being delivered to retailers, inhabitants can enjoy this kind of syrup which can be the ingredients in some kind of food.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 diagram illustrates the process of making maple You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmaple syrupmolasses
syrup
 from the sap of its tree. As it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
clearly
 that there are several steps beginning with taking the sap and ending with finished syrups.

At the first
 step, due to the freezing at nights, the sap This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 up to the stem of the trees; however
, in the daylight with the warm climate, Consider using "all the".all the
all of the
 sap flow down and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can take advantage of this feature to draw the sap through a hold in the tree. There is a tap being inserted
 into that hold in order to direct the sap into tubing that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmits
sends
 the sap to a container.

The following stage is the evaporation process, the collected sap will be taken
 to an evaporator where it will be boiled
 until it becomes You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmaple syrupmolasses
syrup
. These You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmaple syrupmolasses
syrups
 will be ready to be distributed
 to stores and consumers after being packaged
 in bottles or cans. As This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as being delivered
 to retailers, inhabitants can enjoy this kind of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmaple syrupmolasses
syrup
 which can be the ingredients in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 kind of food. 