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Graphic of fans of a female American singer in the U.S. who said each album of hers is their favorite

Graphic of fans of a female American singer in the U. S. who said each album of hers is their favorite PM3RE
The pie chart shown above illustrates the amounts of percentages from people’s favourite albums by an American singer. The most noticeable feature is the album red with a 15% which appears to be well-appreciated by the public, however with 14% and a difference of two years of releasement being almost the same with a slight variation of 1% is 1989. In addition, with the same number we have fearless and reputation which appear to not have any difference in data between them but years, furthermore the three following albums also have no variation at all. Finally speak now had a dramatic decrease with only a percentage of 4% being almost half and third part of the other data which have surpassed it by a huge amount. It could be said that nowadays, people have more preference towards her newest or most iconic albums which made a tremendous impact on her discography, on the contrary her old works are not very popular amongst them.
The pie chart shown above illustrates the amounts of percentages from
people
’s
favourite
albums
by an American singer.

The most noticeable feature is the
album
red with a 15% which appears to be well-appreciated by the public,
however
with 14% and a difference of two years of
releasement
being almost the same with a slight variation of 1% is 1989.

In addition
, with the same number we have fearless and reputation which appear to not have any difference in data between them
but
years,
furthermore
the three following
albums
also
have no variation at all.

Finally
speak
now
had a dramatic decrease with
only
a percentage of 4% being almost half and third part of the other data which have surpassed it by a huge amount.

It could
be said
that nowadays,
people
have more preference towards her newest or most iconic
albums
which made a tremendous impact on her discography,
on the contrary
her
old
works are not
very
popular amongst them.
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IELTS academic Graphic of fans of a female American singer in the U. S. who said each album of hers is their favorite

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  American English
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