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Graphic of fans of a female American singer in the U.S. who said each album of hers is their favorite

Graphic of fans of a female American singer in the U. S. who said each album of hers is their favorite PM3RE

The pie chart shown above illustrates the amounts of percentages from people’s favourite albums by an American singer. The most noticeable feature is the album red with a 15% which appears to be well-appreciated by the public, however with 14% and a difference of two years of releasement being almost the same with a slight variation of 1% is 1989. In addition, with the same number we have fearless and reputation which appear to not have any difference in data between them but years, furthermore the three following albums also have no variation at all. Finally speak now had a dramatic decrease with only a percentage of 4% being almost half and third part of the other data which have surpassed it by a huge amount. It could be said that nowadays, people have more preference towards her newest or most iconic albums which made a tremendous impact on her discography, on the contrary her old works are not very popular amongst them.

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albums
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