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Female school-leavers going into higher education

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The given bar chart shows the percentage of women who have practically finished school and were going to enter higher educational program in 1970 and 2005. There are five countries chosen to provide the proportion of these women, the UK, USA, Canada, Japan and Germany. Overall, the percentages of females going into higher education in 2005 were higher than the one in 1970. However, the percentage of these females in Canada stayed the same.
The
given
bar chart
shows
the percentage of women who have
practically
finished school and were going to enter higher educational program in 1970 and 2005. There are five countries chosen to provide the proportion of these women, the UK, USA, Canada, Japan and Germany.

Overall
, the percentages of females going into higher education in 2005 were higher than the one in 1970.
However
, the percentage of these females in Canada stayed the same.
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IELTS academic Female school-leavers going into higher education

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
74 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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