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This graph shows the average age of British people that had given money to charity through the years 1990 and 2010.

This graph shows the average age of British people that had given money to charity through the years 1990 and 2010. 0n6bB

This graph shows the average age of British people that had given money to charity through the years 1990 and 2010. The 1990 reached its peak with British people between 36-50 years. There was this upward trend, but it began to decrease the percentage over years. On the other hand, 2010 was at its lowest point with people in the 18-25 age bracket, but it has seen steady growth throughout the following years. There was an upward trend in 1990 starting with people with 18-25 years. It even reached its peak with people between 36-50 years and percentage around 40%, until there was a sharp downward trend with 51-65 ages and following. Otherwise, when 2010 was at its lowest point with approximately 6%, it started growing as the years of ages of people increased, until it decreased again with 65 age. It reached its peak with almost 40% with people between 51-65, unlike 1990, it was just in those years of age when it began to decrease its percentage. To sum up, we can see that both are in nearly the same situation as they had a steady growth and reached a great peak, but then started to decrease again.

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