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The given bar graphs illustrate winter and olympics in which number of medals won by different countries.

The given bar graphs illustrate winter and olympics in which number of medals won by different countries. YBgLB
To commence with, in summer olmpics, United states had the highest rank medal of gold, silver and brozen. About 1800 medals were won by Russia, which were followed by Germany as 1700 of medals. Great Britian and France attained same ranking of medals. Moving towards to winter olympics, Norway won 370 medals. Russia and Canada gained the respectively same number of medals 190 and 200. United sattes won more medals as compared to Germany. Overall, it is abuntantly clear that United states taken the highest number of medals in both summer and winter olympics.
To commence with, in summer
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olmpics
,
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United states
had the highest rank
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medal
of gold, silver and
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brozen
. About 1800
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medals
were won
by Russia, which
were followed
by Germany as 1700 of
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medals
. Great
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Britian
and France attained same ranking of
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medals
. Moving towards to winter
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olympics
, Norway won 370
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medals
. Russia and Canada gained the
respectively
same number of
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medals
190 and 200. United
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sattes
won more
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medals
as compared to Germany.
Overall
, it is
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abuntantly
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clear
that
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United states
taken the highest number of
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medals
in both summer and winter
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olympics
.
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IELTS academic The given bar graphs illustrate winter and olympics in which number of medals won by different countries.

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