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The line chart below shows crime in panama city

The line chart below shows crime in panama city d5q76

The line chart provides the information about the changes of three different types of crime between 2010 to 2019 in Panama City Overall at the start of the period burglary had the highest rate in the beginning, however it dramatically dropped. Car theft had some rapid changes but at the end of the period it almost had the identical rate like the beginning of the period. Robbery had the lowest rate and didn’t have rapid changes. Burglary started with almost 3500 of incident rates but the number had significantly dropped down. In just 4 years the number decreased to 1000 in the year 2015, however the number was consistent from the year 2016 to 2019. Car theft also had sudden dip in 2013 and slightly went back to the same rate as the beginning at the end of the period with the rate of almost 3000. The incidents of theft remained low but steady through out the period with the rate of incidents between 500 to almost 1000.

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