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The bar chart compares the proportion of people in Australia who exercised on a regular basis in 2010, according to age and gender.

The bar chart compares the proportion of people in Australia who exercised on a regular basis in 2010, according to age and gender. Wm5PW

The bar chart compared the daily exercise ranging from the youth to the old that both Australian genders did through a particular year. Overall, it is clear that females in their middle-aged group were the most active group, although the young male was responsible for the highest portion over 2010. Moreover, both gender did an equal activity in their old age. Initially, there was a slight growth in women's 15-54 age groups and hit a peak of nearly 53 percent. Then, it decreased minimally to the same amount as the youth did. In contrast, the male groups dropped noticeably and reached a low of around 39%; after this, it increased slightly to below 47 percent. In 2010, both men and women over 65 years old did an equal amount of activity also stood at roughly 47%. However, there was a dramatic difference in activity between the mid-30s and mid-40s.

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old
 that both Australian genders did through a particular year.

Overall
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clear
 that females in their middle-aged You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group
 were the most active You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group
, although the young male was responsible for the highest portion over 2010. Moreover
, both gender did an equal activity in their This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 age.

Initially
, there was a slight growth in women's 15-54 age You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
groups
 and hit a peak of nearly
 53 percent. Then, it decreased minimally
 to the same amount as the youth did. In contrast
, the male You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
groups
 dropped noticeably
 and reached a low of around 39%; after this, it increased slightly
 to below 47 percent.

In 2010, both This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 and women over 65 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 did an equal amount of activity also
 stood at roughly 47%. However
, there was a dramatic difference in activity between the mid-30s and mid-40s. 