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This graph illustrates the amount of money spent on shopping for the five different categories in the UK, Australia, and America. Units are measured in millions of dollars.

This graph illustrates the amount of money spent on shopping for the five different categories in the UK, Australia, and America. Units are measured in millions of dollars. 2KMJJ
This graph illustrates the amount of money spent on shopping for the five different categories in the UK, Australia, and America. Units are measured in millions of dollars. Overall, the consumption of shopping in Australia and America experienced upward trends throughout the time, while the consumption in the UK witnessed a downward trend between 2000 and 2005. It can clearly be seen from the graph, in 2000, the amount of money spent on shopping in Australia accounted for 150 million dollars, while in America it started at 100 million dollars spent for shopping. Then, there was a slight increase of money by 50 million dollars in Australia, but it declined at 180 millions of dollars, while consumption in America gradually increased in 2002. However, the consumption increased sharply at 300 million dollars in America, but ended up at 290 million dollars in 2005. The amount of money in Australia started increasing dramatically in 2003 and levelled off until 280 million dollars in 2005. In the UK, in 2000, the consumption of money for shopping started at 50 millions dollars, then it slightly increased at 60 million dollars, but dramatically declined at 45 million dollars in 2002. However, there was a slight increase in the UK at 70 million dollars in 2003 and then it started declining gradually at 60 million dollars in 2005.
This graph illustrates the amount of
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spent on
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shopping
for the five
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different
categories in the UK, Australia, and America. Units
are measured
in
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millions
of dollars.

Overall
, the
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consumption
of
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shopping
in Australia and America experienced upward trends throughout the time, while the
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consumption
in the UK witnessed a downward trend between 2000 and 2005.

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clearly
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seen
from the graph, in 2000, the amount of
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money
spent on
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shopping
in Australia accounted for 150
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million
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dollars
, while in America it
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started
at 100
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million
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spent for
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shopping
. Then, there was a slight increase of
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money
by 50
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million
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in Australia,
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it declined at 180
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millions
of
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dollars
, while
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consumption
in America
gradually
increased in 2002.
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, the
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increased
sharply
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in America,
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ended up at 290
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in 2005. The amount of
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in Australia
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started
increasing
dramatically
in 2003 and levelled off until 280
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million
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in 2005.

In the UK, in 2000, the
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, then it
slightly
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,
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dramatically
declined at 45
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million
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in 2002.
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, there was a slight increase in the UK at 70
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million
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in 2003 and then it
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started
declining
gradually
at 60
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in 2005.
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IELTS academic This graph illustrates the amount of money spent on shopping for the five different categories in the UK, Australia, and America. Units are measured in millions of dollars.

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