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The map is given shows below the happy valley shopping centre in the 1982 to 2012

The map is given shows below the happy valley shopping centre in the 1982 to 2012 gAwpL

A map is given providing an information about the happy valley shopping centre in 1982 to 2012. Overall, It is clear that a lot of changes was in the given later figures. According to the first graph, In 1982 north west direction lake was there. Moreover, after the lake entrance had located. And, road was passing through western to center direction and near at that place was hobby area established. Furthermore, entertainment area had situated extreme centre. In addition, coffee shops and food store had northern direction. Beside this, sports store and electronics store were in eastern direction. Along with this, furniture store had installed in the the east direction. Similarly, toilets and elevator was in the absoulately southern direction. Movingfurther, In 2012, plenty of changes had been here. Initially, in the place of lake furniture retail was added. A part from this, sports center and electronics center had removed in the direction of eastern and established in the second upper nothern direction. Parking lot also build in western and southern direction. In the same way, rest of factors were gained same direction and place. Finally, themed restaurants also opened in the eastern direction.

A map is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 providing an information about the happy valley shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 in 1982 to 2012. Overall
, It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 was in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 later figures.

According to the first
 graph, In 1982 This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-westnorthwest
north west
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolguidanceleadershiporder
direction
 lake was there. Moreover
, after the lake entrance had located. And, road was passing through western to center You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolguidanceleadershiporder
direction
 and near at that place was hobby area established. Furthermore
, entertainment area had situated extreme Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. In addition
, coffee shops and food You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 had northern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolguidanceleadershiporder
direction
. Beside this, sports You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 and electronics You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 were in eastern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolguidanceleadershiporder
direction
. Along with this, furniture You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 had installed in Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.the
the the
 east You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolguidanceleadershiporder
direction
. Similarly
, toilets and elevator was in the Possible spelling mistake found.absolutely
absoulately
 southern direction.

Possible spelling mistake found.Moving further
Movingfurther
, In 2012, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 had been here. Initially
, in the place of lake furniture retail was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
. A part from this, sports center and electronics center had removed in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolguidanceleadershiporder
direction
 of eastern and established in the second upper Possible spelling mistake found.northern
nothern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolguidanceleadershiporder
direction
. Parking lot also
 build in western and southern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolguidanceleadershiporder
direction
. In the same way
, rest of factors were gained
 same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolguidanceleadershiporder
direction
 and place.

Finally
, themed restaurants also
 opened in the eastern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolguidanceleadershiporder
direction
. 