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The map are shows below the shops of happy valley centre to 1982 to 2012

The map are shows below the shops of happy valley centre to 1982 to 2012 aQX3Y
A map is given providing an information about the happy valley shopping centre in 1982 to 2012. Overall, It is clear that a lot of changes was in the given later figures. According to the first graph, In 1982 north west direction lake was there. Moreover, after the lake entrance had located. And, road was pasding through western to centre direction and near at that place was hobby area established. Furthermore, entertainment area had situated extreme centre. In addition, cofee shops and food store had northern direction. Beside this, sports store and electronics store were in eastern direction. Along with this, furniture store had indtalled in the the east direction. Similarly, tiolets and elevator was in the absoulately southern direction. Movingfurther, In 2012, plenty of changes had been here. Initially, in the place of lake furniture retail was added. A part from this, sports centre and electronics centre had removed in the direction of estern and established in the second upper nothern direction. Parking lot also bulid in western and southern dirdction. In the same way, rest of factors were gained same direction and place. Finally, themed restaurants also opend in the eastern direction.
A map is
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given
providing an information about the happy valley shopping
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centre
in 1982 to 2012.
Overall
, It is
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clear
that
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a lot of
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changes
was in the
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given
later figures. According to the
first
graph, In 1982
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north west
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direction
lake was there.
Moreover
, after the lake entrance had located. And, road was
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pasding
through western to
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centre
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direction
and near at that place was hobby area established.
Furthermore
, entertainment area had situated extreme
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centre
.
In addition
,
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cofee
shops and food
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store
had northern
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direction
. Beside this, sports
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store
and electronics
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store
were in eastern
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direction
. Along with this, furniture
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store
had
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indtalled
in
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the the
east
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direction
.
Similarly
,
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tiolets
and elevator was in the
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absoulately
southern
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direction
.
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Movingfurther
, In 2012,
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plenty
of
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changes
had been here.
Initially
, in the place of lake furniture retail was
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added
. A part from this, sports
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centre
and electronics
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centre
had removed in the
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direction
of
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estern
and established in the second upper
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nothern
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direction
. Parking lot
also
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bulid
in western and southern
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dirdction
.
In the same way
, rest of factors
were gained
same
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direction
and place.
Finally
, themed restaurants
also
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opend
in the eastern
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direction
.
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IELTS academic The map are shows below the shops of happy valley centre to 1982 to 2012

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