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The given diagrams show the ingredients of a fish pie and the commercial production of frozen fish pies.

The given diagrams show the ingredients of a fish pie and the commercial production of frozen fish pies. WqXPK

The given diagrams show the ingredients of a fish pie and the commercial production of frozen fish pies. Overall, it is clear in the diagram that the main ingredients are peas, sauce, fresh salmon, and potatoes. The manufacture of fresh salmon has ten stages. And another ingredient, potatoes, undergoes its six-stage preparation processes before being added to the pie. In the first step, the potatoes are transported to the factory up to a month in advance. Before potatoes are cooked, they must be cleaned, peeled, and sliced. These potato slices go through the boiling and chilling stage before storing. Turning to the salmon preparation, lemon juice and salt are added when fresh salmon arrives at the factory. And the fish is cooked in a steam oven within 12 hours of delivery. The next step is to remove skin and bones. This is followed by an exhaustive visual inspection. Following the inspection, prepared peas, sauce, and potatoes are added. The pies are manually packaged and frozen before storage or shipment.

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show
 the ingredients of a fish pie and the commercial production of frozen fish pies.

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clear
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potatoes
. The manufacture of fresh salmon has ten stages. And another ingredient, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
, undergoes its six-stage preparation processes You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreviouslyaheadsincebacksooner
before
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added
 to the pie.

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potatoes
are transported
 to the factory up to a month in advance. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreviouslyaheadsincebacksooner
Before
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potatoes
are cooked
, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be cleaned
, peeled, and sliced. These You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potato
 slices go through the boiling and chilling stage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreviouslyaheadsincebacksooner
before
 storing.

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added
 when fresh salmon arrives at the factory. And the fish is cooked
 in a steam oven within 12 hours of delivery. The next
 step is to remove skin and bones. This is followed
 by an exhaustive visual inspection. Following the inspection, prepared peas, sauce, and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
. The pies are manually
 packaged and frozen You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreviouslyaheadsincebacksooner
before
 storage or shipment. 