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This diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured. First, put flour into storage silos. Second, put them in the mixer and add water and oil. Third, put them in the rollers and make dough sheets. Fourth, cut them in strips. Fifth, shape them into discs. Sixth, put them in the cooking oil and dry them. Seventh, put them in the cups and add some vegetables and spices. Eighth, paste label and seal on the cups. Done.

This diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured. First, put flour into storage silos. Second, put them in the mixer and add water and oil. Third, put them in the rollers and make dough sheets. Fourth, cut them in strips. Fifth, shape them into discs. Sixth, put them in the cooking oil and dry them. Seventh, put them in the cups and add some vegetables and spices. Eighth, paste label and seal on the cups. Done. JoBgE
This diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured. First, put flour into storage silos. Second, put them in the mixer and add water and oil. Third, put them in the rollers and make dough sheets. Fourth, cut them in strips. Fifth, shape them into discs. Sixth, put them in the cooking oil and dry them. Seventh, put them in the cups and add some vegetables and spices. Eighth, paste label and seal on the cups. Done.
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IELTS academic This diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured. First, put flour into storage silos. Second, put them in the mixer and add water and oil. Third, put them in the rollers and make dough sheets. Fourth, cut them in strips. Fifth, shape them into discs. Sixth, put them in the cooking oil and dry them. Seventh, put them in the cups and add some vegetables and spices. Eighth, paste label and seal on the cups. Done.

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