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The given diagram gives information about the manufacturing of red wine from grapes.

The given diagram gives information about the manufacturing of red wine from grapes. kYKpd
Overall, it can be seen that process of red wine production consists of several steps, from initial selection of grapes to the feeling of wine bottles. In the first step, grapes are picked and selected for making of red wine. Then, chosen crops are kept in anaerobic condition for two to three weeks before crushing it with the machine. After that, crushed grapes are transferred into pot ale with skin for the fermentation, while skin and stems are pressed into a drainer. Due to fermenting and pressing of grapes, free juice is produced which collected into pot ale to ferment. In the next step, this fermented juice is passed through filter for clarification. Later, filtered liquid is pouref into an oaken cask for 6 to 24 months for maturation procedure. Following, in this matured extract, acid and sugar are added for taste adjustment. Finally, red wine is bottled.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that process of red
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wine
production consists of several steps, from initial selection of
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grapes
to the feeling of
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wine
bottles.

In the
first
step,
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grapes
are picked
and selected for making of red
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wine
. Then, chosen crops are
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kept
in anaerobic condition for two to three weeks
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before
crushing it with the machine. After that, crushed
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grapes
are transferred
into pot ale with skin for the fermentation, while skin and stems
are pressed
into a drainer. Due to fermenting and pressing of
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grapes
, free juice
is produced
which collected into pot ale to ferment.

In the
next
step, this fermented juice
is passed
through filter for clarification. Later, filtered liquid is
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pouref
into an oaken cask for 6 to 24 months for maturation procedure. Following, in this matured extract, acid and sugar are
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added
for taste adjustment.
Finally
, red
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wine
is bottled
.
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IELTS academic The given diagram gives information about the manufacturing of red wine from grapes.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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