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Islip town now and planned development

Islip town now and planned development g5EwL

The maps given show the current city of Islip town and new planned development to the town. Many improvements have been decided to made in new map which will attract people towards city. Country has one main road in the centre. On the both sides, shops are established besides, countryside has covered the northern sphere. On the other hand, housing have captured land. School lies in Southern portion and Park reside in south east. Planned development has changed a bit. Now, main road is replaced by pedestrain area rather than it has covered entire town in oval shape. In Northern Sphere, bus station in the West followed by Shopping Centre, car park and New Housing to the east, respectively. Housing has a way to main road, directly. There are just minor variations in Southern hemisphere only New Housing is established. School and one more residential area lies above the dual carriageway. Summing up, new prepared map is more precise and perfect. Places and areas are provided to everything, particularly. Renovated Islip town will be a source of attraction for everyone.

The maps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 city of Possible spelling mistake found.SlipISIPI slipIs lip
Islip
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 planned development to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
 improvements have been decided
 to made in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 map which will attract This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 towards city. Country has one main road in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. On the both sides, shops are established
besides
, countryside has covered the northern sphere. On the other hand
, housing have captured land. School lies in Southern portion and Park reside in This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.south-eastsoutheast
south east
. Planned development has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 a bit. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, main road is replaced
 by Possible spelling mistake found.pedestrian
pedestrain
 area rather
 than it has covered entire You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 in oval shape.

In Northern Sphere, bus station in the West followed by Shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
, car park and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
New
 Housing to the east, respectively
. Housing has a way to main road, directly
. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 minor variations in If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Southern Hemisphere
Southern hemisphere
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
New
 Housing is established
. School and one more residential area lies above the dual carriageway.

Summing up, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 prepared map is more precise and perfect. Places and areas are provided
 to everything, particularly
. Renovated Possible spelling mistake found.SlipISIPI slipIs lip
Islip
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 will be a source of attraction for everyone. 