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This diagram illustrates how Hydroelectric power is generated.

This diagram illustrates how Hydroelectric power is generated. Overall, Hydroelectric power generation is one of the sustainable ways. This process consists of many parts and equipment such as Dam, Turbine, Pump, and Transformer station. Firstly, the waters from the sea get vaporized and evaporated and get transformed into clouds, after that precipitation the rainwater gets collected in "Dam" when the valve gets open then the water gets released with high-pressure through the pipe the reaches the Turbine Station where the kinetic energy gets transformed into electrical energy and the connecting pipe passes the water to the Pump Station where the gets pumped to Dam Reservoir. The generated electricity travels to Transformer Station where they store and convert electricity from DC to AC further, the electricity gets distributed to factories, Resident houses and so on through the underground wire
This diagram illustrates how Hydroelectric power
is generated
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Overall
, Hydroelectric power generation is one of the sustainable ways. This process consists of
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many
parts and equipment such as Dam, Turbine, Pump, and Transformer station.

Firstly
, the waters from the sea
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get
vaporized and evaporated and
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get
transformed into clouds, after that precipitation the rainwater
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collected in
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Dam
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when the valve
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gets
open then the water
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gets
released with high-pressure through the pipe the reaches the Turbine Station where the kinetic energy
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gets
transformed into electrical energy and the connecting pipe passes the water to the Pump Station where the
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pumped to Dam Reservoir.

The generated electricity travels to Transformer Station where they store and convert electricity from DC to AC
further
, the electricity
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gets
distributed to factories, Resident
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houses
and
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on through the underground wire
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IELTS academic This diagram illustrates how Hydroelectric power is generated.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
137 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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