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The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Vista Café by season

the graph show the average sales of selected items at the Vista Cafe by the season。 the percentages of hot coffee in winter was the largest，which was the 75%。the number of soup in winter take the second place，which was the 50%。the number of Iced coffee in winter， which was 63%the smaller than the first one。 by accounting for 40%the number of Iced coffee in summber was the largest。 The number of Ice cream was 2%in summber smaller than the first one，by which it took the second place。this was followed by the number of soup was 30%and hot coffee was 28% maintain。 the number of salad was 22% ranked the last。 all in all，in terms of hot coffee in winter was the largest and the number of Iced coffee in winter was the least。in terms of Iced coffee in summer was the largest and the number of salad was the least。

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season。


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coffee
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winter
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winter
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one。


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number
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coffee
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summber
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largest。
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number
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summber
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place。this
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number
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coffee
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maintain。
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number
 of salad was 22% ranked the Possible spelling mistake found.lastlasts
last。


all in The character ‘，’ is not a standard comma, although it can look like a comma. Use “all, in”.all, in
all，in
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coffee
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winter
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number
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coffee
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winter
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least。in
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coffee
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number
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least。